18 November 2008

That true feeling

A light
like the stars
bright
yet not blinding

a voice
like the sea
clear
yet not deafening

a touch
like the wind
firm
yet not dominating

so binding
yet setting you free
so saddening
yet so pleasing

A force
so strong
it conquered everything
so powerless
it failed to exist
in so many.

8 comments:

Summer Cutee said...

for the great googly mooglyz sake!!
write sth happy!!

m.h.a said...

Nai. Its the week of the sad blogger, my blog has gone so lonely :(

Anonymous said...

such sharp contrast....hmmm

m.h.a said...

Kis cheez may?

Anonymous said...

in the imagery used in your poem :/

Anonymous said...

a touch
like the wind
firm
yet not dominating


My fave line.


My word verification is:mouse.
Weird.
:|

m.h.a said...

Thanx a bunch...the word verification is always so funny but very irritating, i hate it yar...lets all request mr. Blogspot to take it off...

Anonymous said...

Yeah I definitely agree.
my word verification is deder right now.
Strangeee.
I'm sure you can take it off by your settings or something.
But I think it reduces spam so it's okay.